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ROGER'S FAMOUS COMPO.
"Hello,what the heck happen to my garden,my beautiful garden",I shouted at my house phone to the gardner which should have learing has been clearing up the weeds,fungi and do all sort of things to make it beautiful.
"Hello eh...I don't know how to explain Mr Green,is a long story,"replied mr gardener .
"I will hear you out,Mr Garderner,", said I ."It all happened when you hired me to clean up the garden for you during your vacation. I came on the first day with my radio to your garden and played " pump it by black eyed peas while I was watering the plant. Suddenly the squirrel from the tree when went to your house and took your sunglasses and danced hip-hop infront of me. One of them started singing " pump it, ohh,pump it,ohh" and another continued with " turn on the radio,we are on steoreo" I was so shock I ran home and took my radio with me. " said Mr Garderner.
I say,"carried on"
" On the second day i camr with my radio and i turned on Beethoven "divernmento: and every insect came out of your garden and danced . I immediately stopped the radio and the insect start to attack me. I know you wonot would not believe me but all i say is the truth , that day i ran home again. After one week, i came to do the final clearing as you were going to come back very soon. I played " hotel california" and you know whatt happened all your carnivore plant all started singing. I was in disbelief thinking that everything i see is a lie but i found out that is the real things ."
I say," oh really did all that really happened I wondered," I hung ip the phone with a foure like i was mad at him. I jumoped with joy and decided to make somemore experiment to create a more successful living thing. What happened to the garderner maybe he went to look for a physciatist,I wondered but anyway i don't even ( cant see anymore )
Comments By Mrs Chong
-What is all these about ? -There shouldn't be so many dialogues. You're writing an essay,not a script.-You're supposed to be writing on the topic " Health"-Just because its in a dialogue,doesn't mean you can write whatever you want. It should still be in proper english .Put in more effort in your work, I am not marking this nonsense.Plus,it is written in pencil , and being thought by other teachers as an essay from 1T1 -.-"
disgrace to our class sia,-.- . and and, mrs chong say in her whole teaching experience in jwss for 3 years 4 months,its the first time she came across such an essay ,somemore from 3E3 !
(P.S, posted this for FUN since mrs chong say when we're bored can READ FOR ENTERTAINMENT.)
